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Summer Love

Summer Love Shores draped in white sand linens; beaches beckon, "Lovers come lay." Salt perfume, ocean music, moonlit waters their embeance. Treasuring star framed reflections, waves of passion.... Summer love. Contest: sino strings Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi June 11, 2014

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2014 10:31:00 PM

this is deliciously pictured. I bet it would have scored higher if you spelled that one word correctly (ambience) . Congrats for your win.

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/4/2014 9:43:00 AM

Thank you for the sweet comment, Andrea!.. Ha! Where is spell check when you need it! Never my strong suit lol.. Hugs.. Arlene

Ct Duet

Date: 7/3/2014 8:57:00 PM

How wonderful Congrats Tim

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/4/2014 9:41:00 AM

Thank you, Tim!. Hugs.. Arlene

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/3/2014 11:41:00 AM

Wonderful win Arlene,...Linda

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/3/2014 6:19:00 AM

I really enjoyed the imagery in the poem, Arlene, Congrats on the win

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/3/2014 9:36:00 AM

Thank you, Dr. Mehta, my friend!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/2/2014 8:13:00 PM

i like your second line Arlene... :D and this well sweet :) COngratulations .. :)

Theresa Stephens

Date: 7/2/2014 5:25:00 PM

Hi Arlene, I felt seduced by your 'salt perfume' and 'star framed reflections'. to want to tread along your well crafted beach scenerio and recreate my youth again. Well done. Regards Theresa xx

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/3/2014 9:33:00 AM

Thank you so much for the generous comments, Theresa!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/2/2014 4:06:00 PM

Hi Arlene, congratulations on a well-deserved fine win! This piece has such magnificent imagery! Beautiful write! Kindest regards.

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/3/2014 9:31:00 AM

Thank you so much, Pandita. Hugs.. Arlene

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/2/2014 2:14:00 PM

Really wonderful Arlene ! Loved this imagery ,, deserved win my dear friend ! Big congrats !

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/2/2014 2:20:00 PM

Thank you, Dr. Sharma.. Hugs.. Arlene

Paul Callus

Date: 7/2/2014 12:39:00 PM

Congratulations, Arlene! If I were the judge I'd have placed you higher! cu // paul

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/2/2014 1:17:00 PM

Thank you, Paul, my friend. Honestly, I am tickled and surprised every time my name appears anywhere on a winners list with such amazing talent as on this site!. Hugs.. Arlene

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/19/2014 6:09:00 PM

Interesting entry into the contest..Way to go..Very unique..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Arlene Smith
Date: 6/19/2014 6:28:00 PM

Thanks, to you as well, Sara!.. Hugs, Arlene

Paul Callus

Date: 6/13/2014 6:34:00 AM

Hi Arlene! As far as I'm concerned you managed to present the ideal atmosphere for summer love; an appeal to all the senses. [Do not under-rate your work...let others judge:)] // paul

Arlene Smith
Date: 6/13/2014 6:39:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend.. I truly appreciate you taking time to read and comment.. Hugs. Arlene..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/12/2014 8:50:00 AM

you capture a summer love completely, Arlene. Well done!

Arlene Smith
Date: 6/12/2014 9:19:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea.. I always look forward to you stopping by.. Hugs.. Arlene....

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/12/2014 1:44:00 AM

Romantic and summer love nicely defined, Arlene

Arlene Smith
Date: 6/12/2014 6:02:00 AM

Thank you, Dr. Mehta.. I had in mind to read more of your writings this morning... Wishing I could just read poetry all day. Never thought I would say that..Arlene..