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Summer Love

Free and easy So they say Not knowing or caring Your eyes meet Your fingers touch You light that spark As you get caught up In each other's words You feel that electricity It's all around you Burning through your skin Sweet sensations engulf You into bliss

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Rachel St.Cross

Date: 11/1/2012 1:19:00 PM

‡ I Can Feel Tremors Building Inside Just Being Near To Such Beauty, Sweet Beautiful Debbie. 'Burning Through Your Skin, Sweet Sensations Engulf, You Into Bliss.' Tis As A Bloody Mary Without The Vodka Although These Words Alone ? Tis When We Touch Taste And Feel That The True Fires Are Fulfilled; That They Burn But Yesss, Sweet Is Prelude, To Pure Ecstasies. My Love, Always, Rachel *

Debbie Duncan
Date: 11/4/2012 4:33:00 PM

Thank you Rachel ;}

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 10/19/2012 3:31:00 PM

* I Love The Way That This Wonderfully Passion Laced Poem Starts In Silent Lucidity Per Se And Then Quickly Builds Unto A Petal To The Metal Kind Of Love's Moment Burning Up The Shore. Heart's On Fire, My Dear Sweet Beautiful Debbie Duncan. Beautiful And Thank You For Your Kind Visit; Shall Do And You Too. My Love, Rachel *

Debbie Duncan
Date: 10/19/2012 6:50:00 PM

Thank you Rachel for your sweet words ;}

John Loving Iii

Date: 10/19/2012 11:29:00 AM

The caught up part is what I worry about.

Debbie Duncan
Date: 10/19/2012 2:24:00 PM

Hello John,,,, caught up is ok ,,, just as long that the parties know it's just a summer love,,, thank you for reading my words ;} have a great weekend .

Carol Eastman

Date: 7/29/2012 6:56:00 PM

I can almost see the sighs of a youthful summer love. Great write.

Debbie Duncan
Date: 7/29/2012 7:10:00 PM

Thank you Carol,,,,,, I never liked this when I wrote it,,,, always thought something was missing. you have a blessed day ;}

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/18/2012 8:47:00 PM

Reminds me of the song "Fever"which has the lyrics - "What a lovely way to burn". You seem to be saying the same thing in your evocative words. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Debbie Duncan
Date: 7/18/2012 9:36:00 PM

Hey Matthew,,, I love that song " Fever" Ella Fitzgerald does it very well ,,, Madonna did it too,,,, as well as others,,,,, thank you for reading,,,, have a great day ;}

Željko Sitar

Date: 7/16/2012 1:52:00 AM

Yes, summer love is every word you wrote in this beautiful poem. Love from Croatia!!! (We have beautiful sea and beautiful summer) :)))))

Debbie Duncan
Date: 7/16/2012 1:51:00 PM

Thank you,,,, wrote it as I was watching an old romance movie ,,,,,,Croatia sounds nice place to go on vacation,,, you have a great day ;}

Kerry Singleton

Date: 7/15/2012 4:09:00 PM

Lovely & romantic great write Debbie :)

Dan Kearley

Date: 7/12/2012 7:33:00 PM

Ahhhh,Yes...That spark! LOVE<3 (o: Very nice!

Debbie Duncan
Date: 7/13/2012 3:25:00 AM

Thank you Dan,, ;}

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 7/11/2012 5:31:00 PM

Wow! A charminh write Debbie. I like it. Thanks for your uplifting comments on my poem The Mother Earth. You are so kind. -Mohammad

Debbie Duncan
Date: 7/11/2012 10:53:00 PM

Thank you Mohammad for reading my words,,

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 7/7/2012 3:36:00 PM

‡ Wow, My Mind Could Journey Unto A Thousand Joyful Summer Shores Amid The Reflections Borne Amid This Beautiful Poem * Bliss, Sensations, Burning, Electricity, Love, Desire, Endless Beauty * Wrapped In Velvets Bliss * Shall I Whisper Now & Owww But I Must * You Are Beautiful * My Luv, Rachel ‡

Debbie Duncan
Date: 7/7/2012 7:12:00 PM

Thank you Rachel,,,, wrote it in 6,13 ,2011,,, I always thought something was missing,,, you have a blessed day ;}

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 7/5/2012 6:47:00 AM

Captured beautifully, Debbie! Strong emotions and sweet imagery. Best wishes, Keith

Robert Pettit

Date: 7/2/2012 11:10:00 AM

Nice way to poetically describe that wonderful feeling we all get when we finally meet that special someone. This is a totally delightful read.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/29/2012 12:38:00 PM

Oh! So passionate..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 6/19/2012 8:48:00 PM

Lovely poetry, so full of emotion!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/19/2012 12:46:00 PM

What a beautiful day and what wonderful poetry I am enjoying reading today. Glad I came across this poem of yours and read it Debbie. Please keep posting so all can enjoy. Love, Carol

Debbie Duncan
Date: 6/19/2012 8:46:00 PM

Thank you Carol ,,,,, you are always so sweet with your comments,,,, blessings of love to you .

Joann Grisetti

Date: 6/19/2012 9:32:00 AM

A romantic read. Looking forward to more of yours.

Jeffry Cohan

Date: 6/19/2012 8:21:00 AM

no lady, this poem engulfs me into bliss...just an emotional way to express what we all want and feel, some of us get it, some not....but at least we have this poem to bring us into bliss...yours in admiration..PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~

Debbie Duncan
Date: 6/19/2012 8:33:00 AM

Thank you jeffry ;} you have a blessed day !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/18/2012 1:08:00 PM

My heart melted for this lovely love poem Debbie, love it. - hug to you :)

Debbie Duncan
Date: 6/18/2012 3:20:00 PM

Thank you Anne,,,, I always thought something was missing ,,, so I never posted it,,, I wrote 6 13 2012,,, I still think something is missing,, have a blessed day !

Justcallme Britt

Date: 6/18/2012 12:51:00 PM

Too bad it's just Summer Love... <3

Debbie Duncan
Date: 6/18/2012 3:17:00 PM

thank you Brittany,,, wrote 2011,,,, I didn't really like it,, but yes it's to bad it's only summer love,,,,,you have a blessed day.