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Summer Fun

was headed for some summer fun to the beach in the blazing sun but the day was hazy it made me quite lazy people just thought I was a bum Summer Laziness Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mohan Chutani 6/2/20

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/22/2020 1:12:00 AM

Summer days definitely make us lazier than we usually are. Congratulations on your win Timothy :)

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 6/22/2020 2:53:00 PM

Thank you so much Aditi! :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/19/2020 8:22:00 AM

No chance of being a bum, it's like winter here, congrats on your win. Tom

Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/19/2020 3:59:00 PM

Haha no chance

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 6/19/2020 3:25:00 PM

Thanks Tom, no skinny dipping over there then!

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/18/2020 8:43:00 PM

Timothy, congratulations for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 6/18/2020 9:07:00 PM

thank you Mohan! :)

Funom Makama

Date: 6/8/2020 9:10:00 PM

Most profound expressions of your deep thoughts. A great, great piece!

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 6/8/2020 9:28:00 PM

thank you Funom

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/7/2020 1:01:00 AM

Fun take on the prompt, Timothy.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 6/3/2020 8:48:00 PM

G'day Timothy … sounds like a jealous crowd Timothy. They need to relax - thanks Timothy - Lindsay

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 6/3/2020 10:02:00 PM

Right, I wish I had the time to be a bum.....:)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/3/2020 4:54:00 AM

The hot sun drains me too, maybe Im a bum lol.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 6/3/2020 6:32:00 PM

I hope to retire and practice my bums skills soon.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/3/2020 3:11:00 AM

lol with lock down I'm not seeing many beach bums of any description on our local beach! thanks for the smile:-) hugs Jan xx

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 6/3/2020 6:32:00 PM

You are welcome Jan! :)