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Summer Fields Nursery Rhyme

On summer days, in fields so green Lived rabbits and cats, a sight to be seen The rabbits hopped and played all day While the cats watched from far away The rabbits would munch on carrots so sweet While the cats would wait for a chance to eat But the rabbits were quick and never stayed still So the cats had to hunt with all their skill One day a rabbit saw a cat in the grass And ran so fast, its scared little ass But the cat was quick and pounced with a hiss But the rabbit got away, just like this So the cats and rabbits continued to play In the fields of summer day by day And though they were different, they played and dined In their world of sunshine and endless time. Nursery Rhyme Feb 25, 2023

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/7/2024 3:24:00 PM

Hello Aysha, So nice to meet you. This is a cute poem. it will be my fav. Enjoy your evening m y frkiend./Darlene/

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/26/2024 4:55:00 AM

This is a lesson in environmental science! It says a lot about how things work in a way a child could understand.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/21/2023 6:14:00 AM

so sorry I missed this before it is really cute and I see congrats are in order too Aysha:-) hugs Jan xx

Aysha Nuwas
Date: 1/20/2024 1:11:00 AM

Thank you Jan :)

James Fraser

Date: 10/5/2023 9:26:00 AM

Cute piece on two cutie species, and all ended well, and congratulations :)

Aysha Nuwas
Date: 1/20/2024 1:11:00 AM

Thanks

Bill Baker

Date: 10/2/2023 7:49:00 AM

A lovely tale in this fun little rhyme. I wish humans would learn we could also have a good time. If we looked at their sample and liked like their example, we would have a world with more Love and less hate. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your enjoyable poetry, Aysha. Write On! Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Aysha Nuwas
Date: 1/20/2024 1:12:00 AM

Your thoughtful and kind words have brightened my day! I'm grateful for your appreciation of my poem. Your sentiment about spreading love and embracing positive examples resonates deeply. Thank you for your encouraging words and for taking the time to share such a wonderful message. I'll certainly keep writing with a smile on my face!

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 8/25/2023 3:39:00 PM

Wonderful!

Aysha Nuwas
Date: 1/20/2024 1:13:00 AM

Thank you :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 6/18/2023 1:13:00 PM

Sounds like summers in my yard. I have bunnies born every one of the past 3 summers. Neighborhood cats come around and chase them. Lovely visuals here.

Aysha Nuwas
Date: 1/20/2024 1:13:00 AM

LOL thank you :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 3/21/2023 10:20:00 AM

You've captured the carefree spirit of those summer days in this fun poem... A joy to read for kids and adults alike... Nicely done, Aysha!

Aysha Nuwas
Date: 1/20/2024 1:14:00 AM

I tried my best, thanks!

Christopher Grieves

Date: 3/14/2023 1:40:00 AM

This is playful and paints a wonderful picture.. it really made me smile :-)

Aysha Nuwas
Date: 1/20/2024 1:14:00 AM

I love to make the world smile, thank you :)

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 3/9/2023 5:07:00 AM

Congratulations is well deserved. A catchy rhyme with an important message. Paulette

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/8/2023 2:46:00 AM

A wonderful nursery rhyme Aysha, congratulations on your win in Eve’s contest… Belle

Aysha Nuwas
Date: 1/20/2024 1:11:00 AM

Thank you :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/6/2023 3:10:00 AM

Congratulations on this great winning work in Eve's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing..Sara

Aysha Nuwas
Date: 1/20/2024 1:11:00 AM

Thank you :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/5/2023 8:13:00 AM

Much enjoyed the voice of your poem. A very cute, bubbling story.

Aysha Nuwas
Date: 1/20/2024 1:14:00 AM

Thank you Vijay

Eve Roper

Date: 3/4/2023 9:38:00 PM

Aysha, Congratulations on your win Eve

Eve Roper
Date: 3/5/2023 2:12:00 PM

Soup mail

Deb M

Date: 3/3/2023 8:51:00 AM

A bright happy fun poem….just lovely Ashya! Debx

Mike Gentile

Date: 2/28/2023 4:12:00 AM

Aysha, your Summer story is indeed a lovely nursery rhyme! So very cute and full of imagery!! Happy Tuesday!

Aysha Nuwas
Date: 1/20/2024 1:14:00 AM

a very belated thank you!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/27/2023 1:12:00 PM

Your nursery rhyme is so Divine dear Aysha, I enjoyed the nature pets and sunshine smiles, gl in the contest, love xo

Aysha Nuwas
Date: 1/20/2024 1:16:00 AM

Thank you Mystic :) Happy New Year.

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/27/2023 12:31:00 AM

We are so lucky, we can still find the simple things in life are the best, and this poem amplifies this. beautifully.

Aysha Nuwas
Date: 1/20/2024 1:16:00 AM

very true Harry, thanks!

Yann Rolland

Date: 2/26/2023 11:26:00 PM

so lovely poem, with good company of cats and rabbits, this is "fun" and delightful, thanks yann

Aysha Nuwas
Date: 1/20/2024 1:15:00 AM

thank you! :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/26/2023 9:42:00 AM

A delightfully happy and peaceful portrait of summer, sure to thrill children. :)

Aysha Nuwas
Date: 1/20/2024 1:15:00 AM

very kind, thanks!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/26/2023 5:00:00 AM

Lovely and sweet, Aysha:)

Aysha Nuwas
Date: 1/20/2024 1:10:00 AM

:) :) :) many belated thanks

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 2/26/2023 2:16:00 AM

Nice poem Well done

Aysha Nuwas
Date: 1/20/2024 1:10:00 AM

Thank you, sorry I did not reply faster

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 2/26/2023 1:42:00 AM

Lovely nursery rhyme. Hope you'll read my ghost story. You'll get a laugh :)

Aysha Nuwas
Date: 2/27/2023 10:55:00 PM

I did and I loved it, thank you :)

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 2/25/2023 11:35:00 PM

A good poem. Well done.

Aysha Nuwas
Date: 2/27/2023 10:51:00 PM

Thank you very much!