Summer Days

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~Summer Days~ (Triolet) Summer season brings very hot weather But the days cool again when it departs Hear the birds,butterflies see the heather Summer season brings very hot weather There is fun and lots of sun altogether We see sunshine very bright for most part Summer season brings very hot weather But the days cool again when it departs. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 May.3.2015

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Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Date: 5/23/2015 4:16:00 AM

Very nice and vivid triolet. Enjoyed the scenery.

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/8/2015 1:19:00 PM

Beautifully captured and painted THE POEM with beautiful colors of allumination. Captivates the sight easily. 7 indeed. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/5/2015 8:22:00 AM

You’ve captured so much beauty and wisdom into a few lines. Emile.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/19/2015 4:51:00 AM

Thank you ever kindly Emile,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very much appreciated.Pleased to know you think so.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God Bless you! :) D.

Len Gasun

Date: 5/3/2015 11:20:00 PM

This is a very beautiful summer poem you've penned my very dear friend, Dorian.So nice to see birds and butterflies hovering under the bright summer sun. I love this superb triolet so much. Hugging it and you! Thank you so much for sharing and also for your precious time reading my poem and your encouraging words. God bless you always! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/4/2015 3:56:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Leonora,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciated my very dear friend.You're always so sweet and lovingly kind with me my very sweet good friend, sending lots of love and big hugs to you too:) Thanks again for everything. Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you!:)D.