Get Your Premium Membership

Summer Comfort

Within the white cloaked sky Bright blue legs move beneath the cloth Transformation becomes imminent As day presents itself through flowing movement With gentle rays, like arms, pushing the cloak Eyes become affixed on the beauty of the sky As total serenity is found within the depth of color And the heat of the sun becomes a blanket of safety

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/13/2009 12:28:00 AM
Beautiful Poem. It is a skyscape in words. Very nice. Dane
Login to Reply
Date: 8/27/2008 1:01:00 PM
Michael wonderful write Congratulations on your win! Laura :)
Login to Reply
Date: 6/13/2008 2:04:00 PM
A beautiful write Michael. Congratulations on your win in Kristin's contest. Love, Shar
Login to Reply
Date: 6/13/2008 7:23:00 AM
congraats dear friend on this being chosen in Kristens contest stunning work as always keep up the great work and let that beauty continue to flow
Login to Reply
Date: 6/13/2008 7:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Kristin's contest Michael . Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 6/13/2008 1:04:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Kristin's contest Michael.Rgds Brian
Login to Reply
Date: 6/12/2008 6:28:00 PM
I like the peaceful feel and visually interesting format of this poem. Congratulations on being one of the Celebrating Nature contest winners. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
Login to Reply
Date: 6/12/2008 4:37:00 PM
Congrats my friend on your win in my contest - you know how much i love this poem (that same line Brian quoted is my fave!) brilliant! Thanks for entering it, this is awesome! Congrats, Love Kristin
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs