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Summer Comes

Luscious is August With minty fragrance Enlivening vales; As grasses renew Their sizzled display. Awakens now The red of morns-- Outside my gate Flowers explode: Arms outstretched I begin To race, dance-- Winds hail ‘SUMMER COMES!’ Diminishing Hexaverse Contest Sponsor: Emile Pinet 5/22/2020 Checked via howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 5/23/2020 8:36:00 PM
Brilliant. I bet it scored high!! Congrats .
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Date: 5/23/2020 7:38:00 PM
Nette, CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Date: 5/23/2020 12:03:00 PM
This flows so smoothly Nette. You make this form shine! Congratulations on your wonderful win! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/23/2020 4:14:00 AM
Dropping by to congratulate you on your win Nette :)
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Date: 5/22/2020 7:57:00 PM
A beautiful summer scene, Nette! xx Rhonda
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Date: 5/22/2020 4:10:00 PM
Congratulations Nette! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, it was a very tough contest to judge but your beautiful poem successfully caught my attention, well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 5/22/2020 8:48:00 AM
This is a wonderful hexaverse Nette! How lush is August! All the best in a high placement in the contest.
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Date: 5/22/2020 6:08:00 AM
A really picturesque and soothing imagery for the onset of summer. All the best Nette :)
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