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Summer Butterfly

is there a reason your tiny wings flutter by in eager pursuit tasting here and tasting there like a sprite in summer's dream

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Charles Henderson

Date: 6/7/2012 12:20:00 AM

So nice. I like the beautiful simplicity.

Lisa Cooper

Date: 5/26/2012 10:07:00 AM

love the last line! :)

James Peranteau

Date: 5/26/2012 8:08:00 AM

One of the reasons why I grow the Verbena dear poet...for them there "Butter flies" ! *smiles* Great write Barbara ! Have a beauuuutiful weekend....much love, james

Diana-Marie Bombardieri

Date: 5/22/2012 5:49:00 PM

This is a well put tanka, Barbara:) There is a lightness to this piece.

Jack Horne

Date: 5/22/2012 1:21:00 PM

I love this beautiful tanka, Barbara. Congrats on all your wins : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2012 9:15:00 PM

I really like this. I sure want to try one now!!

Karen Croft

Date: 5/21/2012 4:58:00 PM

very nice. thank you for your kind comment on my poetry.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/21/2012 12:56:00 PM

It was a pleasure to read your poetry this Monday afternoon Barbara. I wish you much inspiration that you may continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a wonderful fun loving week and keep the old pen flowing. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/21/2012 11:46:00 AM

Wonderful one..Enjoyed reading this one this afternoon..If for a contest, reads like a winner to me..Your presence at work was uplifting..Soup mail soon..Sara

Larry Belt

Date: 5/21/2012 7:42:00 AM

A Beautiful painting Barb.....Larry