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Summer Beauty

Belly laughs and thrills Water park fun temptations Lasting summer sun The beauty of family Together screams of delight! **Tanka for the A memory of beauty contest/missed the deadline

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Juan Paolo Galua

Date: 8/13/2010 4:05:00 AM

just love to imagine this one DOris...thanks for sharing...I miss my family...tears...^_^ v

Joe Maverick

Date: 8/10/2010 6:30:00 AM

Not familiar with Tanka however, most enjoyable. Thank you for your interest in mine.

Raj Nandy

Date: 8/9/2010 7:36:00 AM

A NICE POEM DORIS ! I am gettin E-mail messages that my poetry is being featured this week ! Can you tell me what that means , as I am still new to this site ? Thanks ! -Raj

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/7/2010 5:49:00 AM

A warm memory you captured in this poem Doris, thank you for your comments on my work.. Can just imagine the trauma of having to explain that to your son at that particular age hey.. :) Tc Wilma

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/6/2010 11:56:00 PM

Very vivid Tanka, Doris, enjoey the write! And thank you for commenting 'Karlovy Vary'...Gert

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 8/6/2010 10:12:00 PM

Very nice Tanka, Doris! Good luck in the contest and thank you for your kind comment on my poem. Caroline.

Virginia Mitchell

Date: 8/6/2010 4:07:00 PM

I smile, thinking of the fun family times in your well done tanks. : )

Lynette Chachere

Date: 8/6/2010 12:57:00 PM

yay, sounds fun.too bad they took away wet n' wild in las vegas.waters great(: ~Always&Forever Lynette

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 8/6/2010 11:47:00 AM

great is the feeling of family good times c: lovely poem

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/6/2010 11:33:00 AM

Luv those screams of delight.. especially on the rollercoaster.... or seaslide.. fabulous write Doris..good luck in Rick's contest.. my entry is FREE..luv..happy weekend..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/6/2010 11:32:00 AM

Delightful memory, Doris! Best wishes in the contest. I love water parks, too. Love, Carolyn