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Summer Beach

Shells gleam, sea of glass Lying on a breast of sand Seagulls wing the sky

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/17/2011 2:26:00 PM
A beautiful write. I was right there on the beach. Thank you for your comment on my write.. Jerri
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Date: 1/14/2011 4:49:00 AM
Hi M. Another gem. Love the last line ( and the others). Eamon
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Date: 1/13/2011 7:41:00 AM
I really like the metaphorical phrases (sea of glass, breast of sand, wing the sky)! A nice, descriptive beachscape!
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Date: 1/13/2011 5:20:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, each line on it's own is great, I don't feel the third line is connected to the other two as well as it might have been
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