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Summer beach

Shells gleam, sea of glass

Lying on a breast of sand

Seagulls wing the sky

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  1. Date: 1/17/2011 2:26:00 PM
    A beautiful write. I was right there on the beach. Thank you for your comment on my write.. Jerri

  1. Date: 1/14/2011 4:49:00 AM
    Hi M. Another gem. Love the last line ( and the others). Eamon

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 7:41:00 AM
    I really like the metaphorical phrases (sea of glass, breast of sand, wing the sky)! A nice, descriptive beachscape!

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 5:46:00 AM
    Lovely haiku, gorgeous images in this short poem.

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 5:20:00 AM
    Beautiful imagery, each line on it's own is great, I don't feel the third line is connected to the other two as well as it might have been