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Summer Alouette 2

Smell the summer air Blowing everywhere Drying up the drops of rain. In this seasons breeze Wheat fields grow with ease Barley, corn and sugar cane. Sun is beating down Warming up the ground. Dandelion seeds float free. Wild flowers with grace Daisy’s happy face, Waiting for a date with bee. Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 08.30.2014 For contest A Lovely Alouette 4th

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Hija De La Luna

Date: 9/15/2014 5:57:00 PM

summery write, Brenda! you brought me summer today, thank you! Congrats!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/15/2014 6:00:00 PM

Thanks Hija

Paul Callus

Date: 9/15/2014 4:04:00 PM

Hi Brenda! This is truly a lovely alouette, as the title of the contest suggests! Lively, sweet and appealing to the senses. Congratulations!! // paul

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/15/2014 6:00:00 PM

Thanks so much Paul.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2014 3:51:00 PM

I just adored yours!!! I marked it down for the dandelion line. My syllable counter put that word at three. But just now I saw another counter that let lion count as two separate syllables. Sorry. This should have been a third place. It's so cute. Congrats in my contest.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/15/2014 5:59:00 PM

Should of trusted me Andrea. I count with my brain, it works better.