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Summer Abandonment

I carefully climb the old oak tree, traipsing upon its extended limb. Hold my breath, counting one, two, and three, abandoning my perch for the swim.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/2/2015 12:08:00 AM
Michael, congratulations on your awesome summer time win. ~SKAT~
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Md Johnson
Date: 6/9/2015 10:59:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 6/1/2015 11:08:00 AM
ah, this is poetry in motion...lovely!
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Md Johnson
Date: 6/9/2015 11:00:00 AM
Again, a very nice compliment. Thank you!
Date: 5/30/2015 11:05:00 AM
Your poem's story like quality, brings a friendly feeling to the reader and we can almost see you swing into the air. Emile. #7
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Md Johnson
Date: 6/9/2015 11:00:00 AM
Emile, thank you. I am happy you enjoyed.

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