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Oh summer what have you done to me so many flirtatious winks teasingly undressing me with every wisp of a welcomed heat filled breath Oh summer, oh how you melt me with those gazing sunrise eyes blinking and those sweet high noon kisses swimming fogging up another afternoon aviator sky Oh summer your warm touches caress and I'm a mess blushing into a golden bronze affair wondering when you're not there if you will ever come back again Oh summer your nights delight with fire and a backyard breeze harmony underneath a blanket of stars and a lemonade moon hushed I swoon knowing I'm in love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/25/2017 12:33:00 PM
Oh so lovely!
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Date: 6/25/2017 8:32:00 AM
Old age , we are blessed to have it but oft sadly, we face its many challenges. Key in facing those challenges is wisdom and your poem notes this in its superb verses my friend! Congrats on this being POTW, as it is a fully well deserved choice...
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Date: 6/20/2017 7:08:00 AM
Hey Timmy boy, Congratulations on POTW. I think officially tomorrow is the first day of summer. Fitting for this poem to be featured:)
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Date: 6/19/2017 10:45:00 AM
Big congrats, Tim!
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Date: 6/18/2017 11:45:00 PM
It is so nice to see this wonderful poem honored with POTW. Congratulations Tim! : )
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Date: 6/18/2017 5:25:00 PM
I am back to say Congratulations Tim :)
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Date: 6/18/2017 9:43:00 AM
Poem of the Week Worthy!!! Congratulations.
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Date: 6/18/2017 8:21:00 AM
- CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR P.O.T.W., TIM - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/18/2017 7:34:00 AM
Congrats on POTW Tim. Wonderful imagery here...Maria
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Date: 6/18/2017 5:03:00 AM
oh Mr Romantic you are on fire with this one and many many congrats on POTW!!!!!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/16/2017 7:50:00 AM
This is perfect Tim.
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Date: 6/15/2017 9:04:00 PM
LOVE this one. So romantic, Tim!!
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Date: 6/15/2017 5:44:00 AM
Good Morning Tim. I very much enjoyed your expression and execution for it is poetry and poetic. Wonderful imagery and chosen words. Well done entirely. Enjoy the morning and day.
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Date: 6/14/2017 7:52:00 PM
<3 This is lovely and everything to love about summer, about love <3 <3 <3 This is a favorite :)
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Date: 6/14/2017 5:33:00 PM
wow thats great Tim........Seren
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Date: 6/14/2017 3:30:00 PM
A poem to read and sigh to....lovely Tim! : )
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Date: 6/14/2017 11:18:00 AM
You are so talented Tim. This is another winner! This paints pictures, feelings, sights and sounds. Well done! - Dean
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Date: 6/13/2017 8:18:00 PM
I'm gonna try and hold these thoughts this Sunday. Supposed to be 100 in Dallas. Stay cool...
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Date: 6/13/2017 8:14:00 PM
This is so much fun. I love it very much, going to my fave list. And summer is my fave season. Beautiful, Tim :)
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Date: 6/13/2017 5:50:00 PM
Summer is my favourite season too, Tim! What a beautiful ode to it! Well done, my friend!
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Date: 6/13/2017 4:55:00 PM
cool, I like that "lemonade moon" summer is such a sweaty thing, stay cool :)
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Date: 6/13/2017 3:24:00 PM
Eye like it.
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/13/2017 4:20:00 PM
Thanks ETT
Date: 6/13/2017 2:55:00 PM
Oh Tim, that poem, that last stanza! It's beautiful my friend. Fav!
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/13/2017 4:20:00 PM
Thank you kindly : )
Date: 6/13/2017 2:14:00 PM
This is very seductive. Nicely written.
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/13/2017 4:20:00 PM
Thank you Dale
Date: 6/13/2017 2:14:00 PM
This was so enjoyable to read Tim. I love it :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/13/2017 4:19:00 PM
Thanks so much Heidi
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