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Summer awakens one warm afternoon uncurling a wave, and sailing with charms. Makes up her bed with the sand in her hair, merrily shaking a red gingham spread, extracting a hotdog, and tossing the bread, raising her eyes, as a seagull is fed
___________________________ For Brian Strand's Contest: #217 Seasonal Acrostic

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/12/2014 10:12:00 AM
Wow that's wonderful Carrie! Congrats on top win!
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Date: 10/12/2014 1:18:00 AM
Well crafted acrostic, congrats on the win, Carrie
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Date: 10/11/2014 9:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win Carrie. I love your summer Acrostic, it's sound like so much fun.
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Date: 10/11/2014 5:35:00 PM
Congratulations, I love this one it is so creative so imaginative and so well written. Congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 10/11/2014 5:33:00 PM
I loved this the first time I saw it. Congrats on your very well deserved win, CArrie.
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Date: 10/11/2014 5:25:00 PM
dropping back with my congratulations Carrie it was a delight to read this again:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/11/2014 4:26:00 PM
Wow Carrie ours would go cool together! Congrad's on your win, Light & Love
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Date: 10/11/2014 4:00:00 PM
brilliant personification of the season here, carrie, really captures the essence of summer; good flow and rhythm - a delightful, feel-good summery poem! congrats on your 1st place win in my contest :)
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Date: 10/3/2014 9:58:00 PM
wow I love how you personified my favorite season, Carrie. A quick word at Soupmail.
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Date: 10/3/2014 3:05:00 AM
Oh Carrie, this is wonderful and I will bet exactly what Charlotte is looking for! It is sure to do great in the contest. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 10/2/2014 10:10:00 PM
Yep, that's summer..love it and love feeding the seagulls. BG
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Date: 10/2/2014 9:46:00 PM
UNBELIEVABLE!!!! In case you can't tell I liked it. What a unique inventive approach to this Acrostic to set you apart from the crowd. Also did you use meter. I know that some Acrostic uses verse. Just magnificent.
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Date: 10/2/2014 11:16:00 AM
wonderful imagery Carrie I expect to see this do really well:-) good luck in the contest. hugs Jan xxx
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