Summer

Sun warmed the noon air, as Umbrellas gave a shade to girls in bikinis. Marvel of nature was visible with ocean waves Made, as they moved with vigor. Everyone around the scene had something worth Remembering, for the rest of their lives! Date: 29/09/2014

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Hansteven Selfa

Date: 1/12/2016 8:10:00 AM

Teddy, congratulations on the win! :)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/10/2016 2:38:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Teddy:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Mcloughlin

Date: 1/10/2016 2:25:00 PM

Many congrats on your acrostic win Teddy! From Jean

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/9/2016 9:06:00 PM

A great look at a summer day at the ocean! Congrats on your placement in the contest, Teddy! Love, Kim

James Inman

Date: 1/9/2016 4:43:00 PM

Nice write, Teddy, paints a wonderful picture.

Skat A

Date: 1/9/2016 3:51:00 PM

Teddy, Congrats on your ACROSTIC POEM... SKAT

Balveen Cheema

Date: 1/9/2016 8:51:00 AM

Like the concept of everyone remembering something! Congrats Teddy!

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/9/2016 7:30:00 AM

You painted such a lovely image of summer, Teddy. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Sandra

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/8/2016 11:23:00 PM

awesome win...LINDA

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/9/2016 2:36:00 AM

Thanks Linda! *^_^* <3

Lu Loo

Date: 1/8/2016 9:30:00 PM

Congrats on your placement :)

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/9/2016 2:35:00 AM

Thank you so much Laura! *^_^* <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2016 9:17:00 PM

Teddy, I see this is one I saw a few years ago. In fact, my comment from before is right under this one. haha. Good thing you chose one I had loved from before! Congrats.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/9/2016 2:34:00 AM

Lol. Thanks Andrea! I'm deeply honored... I'll add it to my own classics collection! *^_^* <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/29/2014 3:56:00 PM

Love it, because it really suits my memory of this season!!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/30/2014 12:04:00 AM

That's wonderful Andrea! In Africa, we have only Summer and Spring....lolest. :-0

Jan Allison

Date: 9/29/2014 7:47:00 AM

lovely summer acrostic - sadly here in the UK summer is over all too soon:-) Hugs Jan xx

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/30/2014 12:02:00 AM

Lol. Don't worry Jan. You won't know when Summer comes knocking at your door once again! ^_^ Thanks for loving my acrostic! <3