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Below is the poem entitled summer which was written by poet POET. UNDERTAKER. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.



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Assessments done summer sets in motion
Fatigue! way out? Screamed I
Gonna teach you a great feel, mom so certain
do away with fatigue, great! Screamed I

all in family moved with dash in motor
crack of dawn by sanctuary thrilled we
riding shotgun on the move by motor
trembling in fear held our hands we

baboons on all sides so near burr
run off with our snacks cried I you crazy
stags with branched antlers move great picture
foliage with blossoms circulates aroma freshly 

sparrows,parrots,cuckoos taking to the air
flies taking wings great sight pleasure
mom raised smile fatigue any more dear
I yelled great mom so energizing very clever


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  1. Date: 8/17/2013 12:41:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win friend Jenish..It's an awesome poem of yours. Have a nice day..cheers!! :) Maria

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 9:02:00 AM
    Congrats on your win in the Member's contest on August 14, 2013 of Poet Destroyer A. Thanks Jenish for appreciating my poem The Pen. You are very kind. Love -Mohammad

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 4:43:00 AM
    congrats on a fine win Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 5:35:00 PM
    Hi Jenish, , ~CONGRATULATIONS~ . thank you for the awesome entry. When you have time enjoy the winners on my XOOL blog * Called "Just For You" Take care --- xox Linda

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 8:39:00 AM
    this seems like an adventure, such love you have for your mother great teachers in life our mothers are, enjoyed your write, always, Linda

    Date: 7/30/2013 6:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    linda my son wanted me to write a poem on the theme "forest" for his class assignment.I wanted to make it little interesting and this was the outcome. The truth is his mother teaches him very great devotion.thank you.