Summer

Sultry sky Undulating uplands Majestic mountains Magnificent moments Exciting escapes. Reality relieved. © July 12, 2011 Dane Smith-Johnsen

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Amanda Moore

Date: 7/15/2011 2:50:00 PM

This is a good acrostic for several reasons. You chose a word limit that is equal for each line which makes it pleasant to look at and easy to read. Choosing two word lines is brave it is not easy to write acrostic in only two lines and you used wonderfully descriptive words to give the reader beautiful imagery!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 7/15/2011 5:35:00 PM

Thank you Amanda for your most kind comment.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 7/13/2011 1:28:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Dane Ann. Excellent piece. xxxRalph

Edward Mccormick

Date: 7/13/2011 1:07:00 PM

Loved how you made this 1st and 2nd word Acrostic. Very unique and great fun to read! Congrats winner! ~ECMc

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/13/2011 12:32:00 PM

Congrats Dane Ann on your super win with this lovely entry ...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2011 9:11:00 AM

Congratulations Dane Ann for your win in the contest "A Poem You Like" sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/13/2011 6:22:00 AM

Congrats my dear on your win.... well written....always Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2011 4:55:00 AM

Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry with usDane Ann . I have enjoyed reading your interesting writing today and will be back again soon to read more. May you have a most wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/13/2011 1:31:00 AM

special KUDOS to you for this superb win, dane!...huggs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/12/2011 12:01:00 PM

Nice.. simple hot, and enjoyable.. Dane, beach time.. is the mist relaxing reality... Thanks for sharing,..p.d.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 7/15/2011 5:36:00 PM

Big Smiles, to my poet friend, p.d.