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golden spears wither my poppies summertime

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/28/2008 8:39:00 AM
nice haku. about my poem silent voices, my soul has left my body pretty much tells what happened. and yes it could be improved, but thank you for reading it and for your comments.
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Date: 7/23/2008 5:22:00 AM
This is wonderfully descriptive and has a terrific flow to it making for a enjoyable and quite understandable read. Michael
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Date: 7/22/2008 2:59:00 PM
a great piece of poetry. well penned
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