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Below is the poem entitled Suicide which was written by poet Alex W.. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Low Road Led By Black
Potential vanished within the 
Flame extinguished instantly
Lights gone dark-response to 
A wink in the span of time
Uniquely minute in sliver of 
Unable to overcome
Forced to take the downward 
sloped path
Than attempt the climb to 
Where the lights stay on
Where the dark has been 
Where the slivers and winks are 
Where the oppression fades 
into support
Where cowards on the low path
Envy the reapers of rewards as 
they spiral down
Into depths so dark so deep
There is no escape but the cold 
kiss of the black
The final weak measure spent
To stave off the pressure
To take the easy way out
To leave all behind in selfish 

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  1. Date: 6/9/2012 6:41:00 PM
    nice write

    W. Avatar Alex W.
    Date: 6/9/2012 6:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you
  1. Date: 6/8/2012 3:26:00 PM
    A very well written and profound piece !

    W. Avatar Alex W.
    Date: 6/8/2012 3:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you