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Suicide

Make believe space and time I'll let you know which creeps up from behind. Is it real or fake? is this all a great mistake? im ready to leave, i want to go above and beyond, through the unknown hear me for yet im not forsaken but here shortly my life will be taken forgive me for relief its something i have to believe the mental pain is far too great when the time is right i will not hesitate so is it fake or is it real? im not really sure its just an emotion i lack to feel.

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Date: 9/9/2011 10:56:00 PM
As a survivor of a husband who took his life by hanging,,I beg of you please to seek help and to know that there are those who care,,me included,,I've been there where you are now,,life is good if you give it a chance,,,Blessings, Gypsy Mist,,,good write though yet so painful...
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Joshua Rawls
Date: 9/13/2011 2:11:00 PM
Thank you for the comment. I am sorry to hear of your loss but thank you for sharing. I am currently seeking help from some doctors. But I think I need more help from the faith side of things than anything. But things are looking up for me since I wrote this poem. thanks again

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