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What can it possibly do
It takes people
From the earth
Every single day
It makes families
Have an empty hole
Like a spot is missing
From a jigsaw puzzle
More found in teens
Because thats when
Popularity means most
Most are kids
Out of the crowd
Some could be cool
But dont have respect
For themselves
Its mostly
Under pressure
The sadness
And pain
In there hearts
Finally win the war
Against happiness
And it just takes over
The whole heart
Making things
Seem much worst
Than before
So they go
And grab
The knife or gun
And kill themselves
Making all the pain
And sadness
Go away
Many people
Still wonder though
Why do they do it
I know why
I am a thinker
Of commiting suicide

Copyright © Allison Unknown

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  1. Date: 11/17/2009 7:37:00 AM
    Please read all of my poems, in this soup, I really hope they might help you, apart from one or two poems, they are there for you,love Simone

  1. Date: 11/16/2009 5:52:00 PM
    Hey if you do need help there is an organization called Gravity... please check them out--Allison

  1. Date: 11/16/2009 5:24:00 PM
    I am not only a thinker of suicide I am an actor.I had an attempt last night but I guess I didn't take enough pills.I know I am paying for it today and it won't be long before I try again.

  1. Date: 11/16/2009 5:23:00 PM
    I've been here. I'm so glad that you've found writing, and I hope it helps you with all these feelings. Today is the 1 year anniversary of my good friend's own suicide, and I can tell you that it will take me a lifetime to heal, and none of her friends will ever be the same. I suggest if you need to confide in anyone or are interested in an awesome community of people trying to prevent these suicides that take away beautiful people every day. Allison

  1. Date: 11/16/2009 5:14:00 PM
    DON'T DO IT!! you can fix it while you're alive! if you die you can't do anything! think about it. you have friends and i'll pray for you. death isn't the answer, you have your life ahead of you and you mus respect that. life is a gift. keep in your right mind and don't do it. i hope you chose to do the right thing. for your lif is very valuable and you just shouldn't just give it up. trust me, things will not get better if you die. don't go, and please don't leave us.------Ell