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Suicide

What can it possibly do It takes people From the earth Every single day It makes families Have an empty hole Like a spot is missing From a jigsaw puzzle More found in teens Because thats when Popularity means most Most are kids Out of the crowd Some could be cool But dont have respect For themselves Its mostly Under pressure The sadness And pain In there hearts Finally win the war Against happiness And it just takes over The whole heart Making things Seem much worst Than before So they go And grab The knife or gun And kill themselves Making all the pain And sadness Go away Many people Still wonder though Why do they do it I know why Because I am a thinker Of commiting suicide

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/17/2009 7:37:00 AM
Please read all of my poems, in this soup, I really hope they might help you, apart from one or two poems, they are there for you,love Simone
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Date: 11/16/2009 5:52:00 PM
Hey if you do need help there is an organization called Gravity... please check them out--Allison
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Date: 11/16/2009 5:24:00 PM
I am not only a thinker of suicide I am an actor.I had an attempt last night but I guess I didn't take enough pills.I know I am paying for it today and it won't be long before I try again.
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Date: 11/16/2009 5:23:00 PM
I've been here. I'm so glad that you've found writing, and I hope it helps you with all these feelings. Today is the 1 year anniversary of my good friend's own suicide, and I can tell you that it will take me a lifetime to heal, and none of her friends will ever be the same. I suggest www.twloha.com if you need to confide in anyone or are interested in an awesome community of people trying to prevent these suicides that take away beautiful people every day. Allison
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Date: 11/16/2009 5:14:00 PM
DON'T DO IT!! you can fix it while you're alive! if you die you can't do anything! think about it. you have friends and i'll pray for you. death isn't the answer, you have your life ahead of you and you mus respect that. life is a gift. keep in your right mind and don't do it. i hope you chose to do the right thing. for your lif is very valuable and you just shouldn't just give it up. trust me, things will not get better if you die. don't go, and please don't leave us.------Ell
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