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Suicidal Thoughts

Every day i smile to hide every emotiion and all the pain i suffer through everyday I keep everything bottled up I dont let anyone know what im thinking Im tired of everyone saying Everything will be fine I just want to give up and die I know that no one really cares Because if you cared you would look right into my eyes and know that im not alright You say im always happy You say im a strong person But what you dont know Is that i go home and cry And wish i would die

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Date: 1/9/2011 8:15:00 PM
Oh boy, here we go again. Ashley, you have too much to live for while you are young. This time, you don't need any corrections made. This is pervasively descriptive.
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Date: 10/24/2009 1:48:00 PM
Ashley, I hope that this is a topic and not your life situation. Depression is a terrible way to live. Keep writing for it can work as theraphy.Sara
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Date: 10/14/2009 10:59:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry today Ashley. Thank you for sharing it with us. Love, Carol
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