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Suicidal Conscious

Ever wonder why people commit suicide? Why they think it's better to leave than to face their fears of life? Some think it's because of depression. Others believe it's bullies. Wanna know what I believe? I believe that we don't want to live with ourselves anymore. Our conscious is getting to us. How is that bad? Because our conscious controls us. Our conscious kills us.. Are you alive right now? No. How, you ask? Because you no longer have control over your body. Your fears now hold the key to your life. They determine what happens to you. Are you afraid? Do you think your conscious will turn on you? I do.. Wanna know why? Because my conscious is already turning on me. Oh, you thought I was alive? You thought I was different? Well, that's false. I'm dying inside just like you..

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Date: 4/29/2013 10:09:00 AM
This is very deep Adrianna, hope you are well this morning. LInda
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