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Suicidal Bomber

i and my killer standing face to face i can see the redness in his eyes he would have not slept last night i and my killer we have never met before we are complete stranger to each other perhaps he not knew neither i why he is going to kill me i have kids back home he is in his teen should be alone but now the time has finished we are ready to go in the tunnel of dark we will be no longer i and he we will be a news article hereafter i have no fear i have only worry how to save my kids from becoming a next suicidal bomber o my killer let it be the last victim let the world lovely as it was before you u need my blood its there not for ugly thoughts of you but for the promising new peaceful world

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M. Shahid H. Chouhdry

Date: 8/16/2013 5:13:00 AM

Being a good poetic verve ,not to target any one ,you may just write it up for one side, whether for martyrs or for those who die with their young blood, try to add consonantic manner and avoid short term of verbs.Best wishes.

John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo

Date: 11/4/2009 9:38:00 AM

A painful dark yet compelling write indeed great work

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 11/4/2009 8:36:00 AM

Thank you for demising cold killing based on killing euphoria in your poem, and thank you for spitting over moslim murderers who do not understand Jesus Christ and His ten commandments. God blesses truthful apostates. Pls comment my poetry-SweetRyhme...thankfully.

Kamran Rashid
Date: 5/12/2013 2:22:00 PM

tht''s not rght//islam iz the religion of peace...y r u considering oll muslims as terrorists.... terrorism iz what makes u conscious about yourslf,,whch brings the fear to u... then 4 a kid a teacher iz a terrorist,,a policeman iz a terrorist aswell..if u consider things lyk that.. STOP DIVIDING & STAY UNITED...