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Suicidal

Sitting beside the water, Underneath one of the stars. Everybody watches him as they drive by in their cars. Tear-filled eyes sits this troubled child. His heart is sad his mind gone wild. With no one to comfort him, alone he sits in sorrow; Hoping his problems will be gone away tomorrow. And while he waits a tear falls down, rolls off his leg and drops to the ground. His body is aching, his eyes are red He has this sharp pain in the center of his head. He thinks back on life and all the things he didn't do; And while he thinks he pulls out a .22! With the gun to his head he cries one last cry; As he thinks how good It will be for him to die! The trigger gets pulled back and so does his life. With just one shot he ended all his pain and strife!!! He didn't stop to think who might be hurt; As they watch his body being carried to the dirt. All he could see was the bad in life and all the people who didn't care. How his mother hated him because he was a painful reminder of the father who was no longer there. How he was constantly bullied and picked on at school. Or how the only girl he ever loved played him for a complete fool. Tears, pain ,love, strain; Lots of lose no gain!!!!!

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Date: 6/14/2016 6:33:00 PM
Rachel Gully, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. **SKAT**
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