Suicidal

She's called fat and ugly everyday So she takes pills to cope with her feelings So she cuts herself to make the tears go away Weeks of dealing with the pain She becomes suicidal She overdose and slices until she feels like she no longer can So now she's suicidal and she can't fix that

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/19/2015 9:49:00 PM

Zakiyah, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 8/18/2015 11:16:00 PM

Hi Zakiyah, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT