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Sugar Sweetness

example for my " A Kiss Like Fruit" Contest Warm juices drip slow.. Lips now savor the sweetness.. Tongues wiggle in heat.. A ripe peach like kiss.. Sugar level rises fast.. A tasty kiss born..

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Katherine Stella

Date: 10/23/2011 7:54:00 AM

OMG will have to jump in on this one as juicy as this is you did very well on this write Mike ok now where did I place my smokes lol thanks for sharing dear one keep up the great writing enjoyed also thanks for your kind comment on my halloween one

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/21/2011 3:41:00 PM

I'm glad the soup is back up too... and by the way.. a sweet poem,, and the best of luck,..p.d.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/15/2011 7:54:00 AM

YOwza yowza poem for your kissing contest. I see EVERYONE IS GONNA ENTER IT! I think I will do a colab write with my spouse for this one....we will have to practice first. lol. This is a fun break from all the autumn writes...altho I do love to write about this time of year. All the best!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/11/2011 10:57:00 PM

GREAT and tasty example, Michael. I really want to do this contest. I just hope I can hurry before it fills up!!!

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/10/2011 8:08:00 PM

ooh la la , great example for the contest

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/10/2011 7:26:00 PM

Passionate! What a feeling it gives the reader. Now I need your address to send you the bill for my cold shower. I saw on your blog that Francine needs one too. Great example for your contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/10/2011 11:52:00 AM

wow I don't believe we are on the same poetic plane so deeply Michael luv.. peachy poem with lines of succulent delight.. oh am giving my entry away luv.. awesome example.. good luck with new contest... I cannot get upset over those GMEN..just when they had a chance to move up in the division.. bingo.. they lose.. but the boo birds .. crybabies lost in style and Reid is just about out the door...finally..with luv forever and always... xoxo.. but I am still upset over Yanks.