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Sugar Binge

Gold and moist the cupcakes rise Almond flavored; sweet. In one dash with time precise; Hunger sneaks a feast. Mouth aglow, I take a bite Till I nibble eight. Sugar- binge, my sheer delight Though I’m overweight! Andrea Dietrich's ' Have You Tried a 7/5 Trochee?' 4/13/2015

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Skat A

Date: 5/3/2015 9:54:00 PM

Nette, Congratulations on your Trochee poem win. :) SKAT

John Freeman

Date: 5/2/2015 9:59:00 PM

Congrats on your win Nette, now\have a blessed one! Agape, Moses

David Fisher

Date: 5/2/2015 8:17:00 PM

This was funny and perfectly finished...it hits the spot, Nette

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/2/2015 7:57:00 PM

Cute as a cupcake! Congrats. BG

Mohan Chutani

Date: 5/2/2015 12:14:00 PM

Nette, overweight by sugar binging is a sweet idea. Congrats. Mohan

Paul Callus

Date: 5/2/2015 11:17:00 AM

Lovely, sweet and tempting, Nette!! Congratulations on a very deserved win. Hugs // paul

Judy Konos

Date: 5/2/2015 10:10:00 AM

Congratulations....Clever & Fun read

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/2/2015 8:56:00 AM

Ahh!! Great quality work!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

John Lawless

Date: 5/2/2015 7:23:00 AM

Nette, a beautiful treatment of the recurring challenge of chocolate -- BET YA CAN'T EAT JUST ONE!! congrats.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/2/2015 6:33:00 AM

Love the humour here Nette - the cake sounds delicious but I can see you do not over indulge you are so lovely:-) many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 5/2/2015 12:40:00 AM

Good one:) Congratulations! Forever ~SKAT~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/2/2015 12:36:00 AM

Nette, you did my 7/5 Trochee proud!! And for the first time in a long time, you fooled me. I had no idea you wrote this one because always you do more nature themed poems! Loved this. congrats.

Julia Ward

Date: 4/15/2015 11:51:00 AM

Great fun! A 7 from me. Hugs, Julia

Constance La France

Date: 4/15/2015 9:28:00 AM

nette, delightful, you made me want a taste, 7, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, In The Forest Den

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/14/2015 8:17:00 AM

Such a sweet poem, Nette! Excellent flow of words for the form. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/14/2015 3:13:00 AM

Very tasty cupcakes of almond flavored to pass time. Beautifully written. Good luck in the contest my lovely friend. i feel 7+ here. Loved always,bl

Robert Lindley

Date: 4/13/2015 9:20:00 PM

So sweet the words. So sweet the cupcakes... Now you made me want chocolate donuts.. A7 and great write!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/13/2015 11:31:00 AM

So nice to read your verse this morning. (But LOL did you have to make me hungry?) Keep up the good work. Light & love

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/13/2015 11:06:00 AM

Its both amusing and entertaining all in one fine poem. Well done. Emile. #7

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/13/2015 4:58:00 AM

An adorable quatrain; sugar binges are a fact of life...why fight them?

Nandita Das

Date: 4/12/2015 10:12:00 PM

Wow, this is deliciously delightful....#7

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/12/2015 4:48:00 PM

Cute one..Those sugar binges can be rough..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Thanks for fhe visit to my page..Sara

Manny Paras

Date: 4/12/2015 12:44:00 PM

Okay, did you have to rub it in? Lol! I have this fancy for my mother's brownies. You are sneaky, top-of- the cream poet, Nette

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/12/2015 12:37:00 PM

- Take a bite ..... and you just want more .... and more :) - Sweet - I wish you best of luck in contest, dear Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rhoma Em

Date: 4/12/2015 11:46:00 AM

Those sugar moments, I can't refuse! And the last two lines spoke to me; impressive. Thank you for your greetings!