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Suebeth

Abroad in dreams and well asleep Wearing a dress of purple rain Motionless under-covers keep... And knowing this her killer came The air around the moon was death Her eyes opened in shock and ease She never took another breath Her dress with blood of his disease The killer clever stripped her clean To bury treasures...dress and gown Without events of crime to scene A murderer so walked the town Years afterward and in the night A woman whistled in the rain From candles to no candle light And often called me by my name ...Before I'm hanged I must confess 'Twas I who murdered my SueBeth How could someone have found her dress? She must have worn it after death! Ghosts!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/22/2011 1:04:00 PM
spooky little tale, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 6/21/2011 9:01:00 AM
Many congrats on your win in our contest, Johny : ) Carolyn and I loved your poem.
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Date: 6/21/2011 4:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's & Jack's "Ghosts" contest Johnny. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/20/2011 9:43:00 PM
I remember liking this one a lot when I first saw it. Glad to see it made the list, Johnny. Way to GO!
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Date: 6/20/2011 8:09:00 PM
Congrats Johnny on your amazing win in the Ghosts contest with this extraordinary entry luv.. enjoy your top ten victory..
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Date: 6/20/2011 6:13:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of carolyn, Johnny
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Date: 6/20/2011 4:24:00 PM
A great story and truly ghostly. Congratulations Johnny. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/20/2011 3:31:00 PM
I really enjoyed this poem, Johnny. Great story told in verse. Congratulations on your win in the Ghosts contest! Jack and I judged blindly and there were many good entries that did not place, so those who did should feel very proud. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/20/2011 3:24:00 PM
This is great..wonderful imagination...congrats. BG
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Date: 6/18/2011 6:04:00 PM
wow, johnny. I am impressed. this is a GREAT ghost story!!!
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