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Conjured an ocean of emotions Within me lured, twisted and tangled Swiftly and quickly my heart pounding At a thought, a vision, a moment All my senses invited and aroused To play in a circle for answers I lay washed up on the shoreline A journey with the waves to ponder Every part of my being, wrestling the forgotten and the unknown Alive, awaken, eyes wide open My mind, body and soul to take I sacrifice to dance in the circle Questions and answers I seek Emotions and moments that spark Imprinting on my mind to last Come forth to replace that which is gone To blast the past and pave for the new Its all experience, that makes me I seek who I am and what I want The hardest journey to go on Answers hardest to seek.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/2/2015 11:19:00 PM
SHAZ, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Date: 6/1/2015 10:50:00 AM
Hey Shaz, BIG congratulations on your wonderful poem being featured this week! Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 6/3/2012 3:41:00 PM
I can't help but think of Billy Ocean. You have a wonderful way of dancing with your words.
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Date: 5/27/2012 5:40:00 PM
You put so much feeling,and thought into this! X-celent! :o) And thank you for gazing into my mind,and thoughts..I hope it was enjoyable? :o)
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Date: 5/26/2012 10:05:00 PM
WOW,THIS IS TRULY A STUPENDOUS POEM DEAR POET!!!
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 5/26/2012 10:36:00 PM
Hey Bowe....... Thank you :)
Date: 5/26/2012 4:19:00 PM
Know myself again in some of these lines, well written Shaz. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 5/26/2012 9:13:00 PM
Hi Anne - Lise so lovely to get your comments. Thank you so much. Sunday now, but I have had nice weekend - Shaz :) mwah
Date: 5/26/2012 8:52:00 AM
How awsome is this! so many fav lines in it I can't quote them all! :) "all my senses invited and aroused to play in a circle for answers"... cool personafication! Well Done write Shaz!!! write on, my friend :) big hug, love ya, deb
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 5/26/2012 9:12:00 PM
Hey Deb....wow I'm so glad u enjoyed my poem. thank you for your flattering comments! - Shaz hugs right back at u..
Date: 5/26/2012 2:19:00 AM
Feels like the thoughts running through the mind of a sprinter just before he crosses the starting line. Love, justin
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 5/26/2012 9:10:00 PM
I never thought of it that way......but i love the different perspectives people have when they read other poems. Awesome thanks Justin - Shaz xo

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