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the heaviness of muscle constriction heaves easy simple touch caresses a pillar of strength apexes amongst the clouds a breath of fresh air ________________| PENNED ON JULY 25, 2014!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/3/2014 11:24:00 AM
he he he I will take the hugs and smiles.. now please....LINDA
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/3/2014 11:33:00 AM
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Date: 9/2/2014 10:12:00 AM
sweet, another reply... love Linda
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/2/2014 5:52:00 PM
I am here with a hug and a smile. LVerlena
Date: 8/26/2014 5:41:00 PM
Congrats for your win, Varlena. Some original thought in this one.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/26/2014 7:45:00 PM
Thanks Andrea... Verlena
Date: 8/25/2014 5:27:00 AM
I love the images that conveys your thoughts, Verlena. congrats
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/25/2014 6:07:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Mehta for your supportive remarks... Verlena
Date: 8/24/2014 3:41:00 PM
Verlena, Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest "IN THE CLOUDS!" Take care and enjoy my blog, "Pillow Fights" If you like or have the time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/24/2014 3:58:00 PM
Thanks for the placement PD. As always, I am sending you a smile and a hug. Verlena
Date: 7/28/2014 8:28:00 AM
Nice one Verlena - I did re-read to get the benefit of where I missed it with first read... but nicely done...
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/28/2014 11:46:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Marie for your supportive comments. LVerlena
Date: 7/27/2014 5:15:00 PM
a very interesting approach to this contest. She may have only wanted one and not two, Verlena. Check her rules again.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/27/2014 5:35:00 PM
Thanks Andrea. However, she did not specify... Verlena
Date: 7/26/2014 3:51:00 PM
Hi, very good images you write out. I like it.................and now I feel like stretching my back and look up at the sky. :)
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/26/2014 4:25:00 PM
Thanks Gry and I am pleased that you have enjoyed sudden release... Verlena
Date: 7/26/2014 2:49:00 AM
Wow very lovely haikus Verlena! Ur words r power packed my friend!
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/26/2014 11:06:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Sharma... I enjoy your comments a lot... Verlena

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