Sudden Change Compares

Sudden change compares Good, evil, both enlighten… Confusion therein Russell Sivey

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/22/2012 9:13:00 AM

yes i can see the fine line there.....thanks for your encouraging comments.....you have penned this write with artistic precsion.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/21/2012 6:38:00 PM

yes, both things happen with good and evil: enlightenment AND confusion. That's the humans' lives!! It was lovely to see your comments today, Russell. Thanks for your placement of my old men trees!! Luv, Andrea

Jack Horne

Date: 2/21/2012 2:40:00 PM

clever piece, my friend

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/21/2012 11:40:00 AM

a mighty read, russell.. you are getting into the league of short form writers!... could you check my " bedtime magic" poem.. that's a long one; need your critique..:) huggs!..soup mail!

Don Johnson

Date: 2/20/2012 11:01:00 PM

wish i could write like you mate, perhaps when i mature mentally hey...if..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/20/2012 8:47:00 PM

ah perfection Russell.. good luck in the contest if so entered.. a brilliant masterpiece of knowledge and wisdom.. wrapped into three lines luv..

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 2/20/2012 8:17:00 PM

Dear Russell, Superb Senryu POETRY is Enhanced with YOUR MightyPen, very Impressive Fill me with YOUR Heart with LOVE, ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege.. .HG ( Harry )

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/20/2012 12:24:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work..Yes, at times we have that good and evil comparison going on in our heads don't we...Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/20/2012 8:59:00 AM

nice senyru