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Such Great Kites

In a meadow fair lived the mouse Ben, Who fell in love with the squirrel Jen. He wanted to marry but had not a dime, “What could I give her that's shiny and mine?” He thought and he thought and then he knew, What he could give that was neither old nor blue, “I know! A star, for what burns brighter Than love lit from afar?” So he called to the moon and asked for her advice, She told him, “I'll give you a star but there is a price.” Up the ladder he climbed with shovel and grin, He began to loose a star from its pin. Jen watched from below, wringing her hands, For she knew sometimes the stars had other plans. And when he fell from heaven, the Moon took pity. “He would give you the brightest star in my city.” And then from a mouse he was quickly turned She searched high and low but when she learned, Poor Jen cried in relief, then sighed, She pleaded with the goddess, who replied “I'll give him back, if only I knew, which of my constellations I made him into...” She extended her hand as a friend, “You must find him yourself, and only then, Fear not, don't despair, not all is lost, But everything changes, it comes with a cost.” Jen searched high and low, pry and pull But some stars were too hot ,others too cool Finally she found him! Shaped like a rose, When she touched his hand they both froze. Falling from the heavens, both intertwined They really were in a pickle, a real bind. Suddenly they gasped, feeling lighter They were coasting on wing flaps and fur Laughing with joy, they glided higher, they flew! For a new journey, they were forged anew ------------------------- So my friend challenged me to write a poem/story about sugargliders, the moon, and a dime. In the end the squirrel and mouse are turned into sugargliders. Hope you enjoyed it. Written 5/6/2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/6/2014 9:38:00 PM
Who said that kites were only made for kittens who in the winter wear warm mittens and if outside when it will be dark listen for bark of a dog in the park. By to one is becoming quiet a poet who follows the principle invented by Peter When you want to get warmer have to stand closer to the heater. Check out my Willy the Wasp Poem. It is right down your alley or was that down in the valley which I always wondered why it was so low. Jim Horn
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Date: 7/24/2014 3:45:00 PM
Stopping by giving you your props...congrats...any more thought about the book idea?
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A.E. Rivenbark
Date: 7/24/2014 5:21:00 PM
Thank you. I have been thinking of writing a few more fables and bundling it to self publish. Super swamped with work lately though.
Date: 7/18/2014 2:52:00 PM
A E., Riverbank, , Congratulations, on your awesome Fable ..... Always~ Linda
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Date: 7/17/2014 6:50:00 PM
A great story. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/16/2014 8:48:00 AM
Another new word I learned, sugar glider, kind of like a flying squirrel, only a marsupial. Great story! Congratulations.
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Date: 7/15/2014 12:05:00 PM
Very, Very enjoyable write. I'm glad to have had the chance to read it in my contest. Congratulations on the win.
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A.E. Rivenbark
Date: 7/15/2014 7:14:00 PM
Thank you, I wrote this a few months ago and didn't know what to do with it contest wise. Not as much of a fable, but it was a fun write. Great poems in this contest too. :D
Date: 5/7/2014 6:40:00 PM
Awesome!!! Amazing!! a million other great words too. great job :)
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A.E. Rivenbark
Date: 5/7/2014 10:31:00 PM
thank you! :D
Date: 5/7/2014 6:31:00 PM
This is marvelous...I love the story and the rhymes are wonderful...This could be a children's book...I am serious I have read many(too many,,lol) and this is one of the tops...definite favorite Tim
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A.E. Rivenbark
Date: 5/7/2014 10:28:00 PM
I've been considering making it into a kid's book but wasn't really sure about it. Thank you so much for the kind words and motivation.

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