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Such a Sexy Voice

Mum asked me to make a call I spoke to a man his name was Paul Oh what a voice – I am in lust Sounded as deep and rich as melted chocolate With a lilt like Sean Connery – pwoooorrraaahhhhhhhh But did I ask him - no I didn’t dare Was he the man of my dreams and have greying hair Jan Allison 5th July 2014

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Date: 7/25/2014 9:27:00 AM
Oh, Jan. I resemble that remark, lol, but alas I am no Sean Connery. I love the imagery, "..as deep and rich as melted chocolate." Very nice.
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Date: 7/25/2014 9:31:00 AM
I love deep sexy voices lol. Hugs jan xx
Date: 7/6/2014 7:01:00 AM
Better call him back and see what develops, my friend. See if that chocolate is covering a scoop of ice cream with a nice cherry on top. Sounds tasty, Jan.... Robert.
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Date: 7/6/2014 8:07:00 AM
LOl Robert just a chap in a call centre and I sadly have no need to ring back - unless I ring to say I'd written him a poem and that wouldn't be PC LOl. Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 7/5/2014 6:58:00 PM
My dearest Jan...I'm too taken with the grey...older men....I was always fascinated by them. Melted chocolate....YUMMY! Oh but hon...older men are MEN. They are riddled with foibles too, but a least they have the looks to compensate...and if the chocolate is in the voice? There is no way to resist. Paul, eh? ;) Hugs
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Date: 7/5/2014 7:09:00 PM
Am with you there Eileen - men they definitely improve with age and the greying hair mmmmmmmmmmm and there is no harm in dreaming! Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 7/5/2014 6:42:00 PM
lol...I'm sure he did. You better call back...hugs Tim
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Date: 7/5/2014 7:08:00 PM
Was a call centre Tim bet I never get to speak to the same person twice ... but I can dream:-) Hugs as ever Jan xxx
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