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Bring your saucy smile that spark in your eye give me sanctuary from satans hell just that smile and a twinkle in your eye I'm sent soaring into seventh heaven conjure magic spells, and charms that you weave my imaginations dreams delivered no magicians magic wands need waving just an acclamation of love desired succumb now and save my suffering soul Raise a white flag and surrender your whole don't be wondering should I show resolve No harm in surrender love is the goal Surrender your body your heart and soul when cupids arrow hits body and soul comp entry 05/08/2016

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Date: 8/17/2016 5:17:00 PM
I actually love your poem! It's so cute! It didn't really meet the strict requirements of iambic pentameter and rhyme scheme I was looking for, but for the theme I really love it, Stephen! :)
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 8/17/2016 5:23:00 PM
Cheers becca no surprises lol tried for fun and ir was good comp won by the real poets . Cheers deffo over my pay grade lol

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