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Succinct Queen

Unconventionally brilliant Champions that are resilient To being rocked down the chart Living forever in our hearts Sounds make you want to break free From the boundaries of conformity Let them rock you til you drop Play the game, never stop Like Mercury rising up the gauge Under pressure to perform on stage A kind of magic then ensues The crowd erupt so enthused The show must go on still That would be Freddie’s will He wanted somebody to love and trust Not another one that bites the dust Mr Fahrenheit will live forever Their songs so many will treasure Killer Queen come what May But not without the great Mercury!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/4/2016 12:50:00 PM
I really like this. I too was a fan of this group. And I even considered doing my poem on Freddy too. but it's YOUR group to do. I think i will try Three Dog night. haha
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Laura Hay
Date: 9/8/2016 4:19:00 AM
Aww thanks Andrea, i'm sure you could have done it on Freddy with a different take to mine of course as anything you write would be fantastic! Good luck with your poem whatever you decide to do ;) warm regards, Laura.
Date: 9/1/2016 12:03:00 PM
This must be for the rock 'n roll contest, Laura....The Queen and Freddie Mercury are on their way to rise up the charts once again, thanks to your clever write:) I hope the judge likes this as much as I do! Warm regards // paul
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Laura Hay
Date: 9/2/2016 7:30:00 AM
It sure is for the contest Paul. I love listening to all sorts of music, i have a bit of an ecclectic taste i think. Nice to hear you liked this one Paul. Your kind comments are always welcome! Warm regards, Laura.

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