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Success Is Not Always What You See

"success is not always what you see" This the tale of the janitor Who loved his job with a passion Who shone at his job like a star Never late to work on a single day Never called in so many years He met many fresh and young students Who all were trying to achieve big dreams Carrying their big school bags as they rushed to their classes He cleaned the floors and surfaces for them So they could learn in a clean environment He maintained the school, with skills that ruled His joy to see graduates, his joy to see new faces He met lecturers with features well textured Some too serious, some always had a smile as they passed him The countless footsteps that he cleaned Of tomorrow's stars The many tears that he wiped Of tomorrow's heroes The trash he removed Of cleaner minds Always remembered The face that saw it all The man that kept all in order

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/30/2015 8:27:00 AM
This is truly spectacular. If I were choosing, this would be POTD.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 10/3/2015 4:57:00 PM
that's nice of you to say that Richard. thank you for the visit
Date: 9/29/2015 3:50:00 PM
I love how you told the tale of this simple man. He saw so much and did things that were probably taken for granted and yet he did his part in the world!
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 10/3/2015 4:56:00 PM
thank you Andrea. I appreciate the visit
Date: 9/29/2015 1:55:00 PM
- Many wise thoughts in these beautiful lines, Njeri !! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 10/3/2015 4:55:00 PM
thank you a lot Anne Lise. I appreciate the visit
Date: 9/29/2015 5:55:00 AM
LOVELY...everyone is important really even those who do jobs considered "less". well penned Njeri
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 10/3/2015 4:54:00 PM
trudat. thank you Marion. I appreciate the visit
Date: 9/25/2015 10:14:00 PM
Very well written njeri. An appreciation shown here, for a diligent man. Enjoyed reading.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 10/3/2015 4:53:00 PM
thank you Michael. I appreciate the visit.

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