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Suburban Summer

, riddles N' rainbows paintbrush the day summer's heaviness invades rain circumvents geraniums ant's N' azaleas dance through sidewalks where tiny green grass creep 'neath weeds to see sun seed grey with bright frogs N' grasshoppers flop along best friends when storm clouds bend beyond old oak trees boys N' girls skip rope, Double Dutch N' such up N' down the cul de sac curve moms N' dads pretend everything's ok when they've long since strayed away from light N' love gloves come off when lights go out they scream N' shout the children barely notice yet they'll feel the coldness N' cold shoulders as it's gets colder N' colder just not days N' nights like now fuss N' fights have no place right here N' right now along these roasting roads where ticky tack homes crowd suburbia where riddles N' rainbows paintbrush the day summer's heaviness invades as nature n' naïve children play... today , ~JSLambert 2014

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Date: 7/6/2014 9:27:00 AM
How are you doing today, my friend? I am really sick. Got a 24 hr. bug from hubbie and I'm at the tail end of it but can barely bring myself to do comments. but I've got 8 to go and I'll be caught up. Boy yesterday was HORRIBLE!!!
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Date: 7/3/2014 11:17:00 PM
YES, this is GREAT work!!!!! Love it. I am well familiar with the song this refers to, and that makes it more meaningful to me as well. BTW, sunshine, whatcha saying about my old poems? I always be SPOT ON. Hahahaha
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Date: 7/2/2014 10:19:00 PM
Hello J S Lambert, my favorite form, Alliteration....Now How About That!!! This is my favorite poem, of the day and week and month. A super fav... Awesome flow. Double Dutch N' such <--- where riddles N' rainbows paintbrush the day summer's heaviness invades <--- The best ending. :) I know this fun, Suburban Summer.... Sadly, our areas, are not as fun as you display... LOL... Love this... Linda
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Date: 6/27/2014 4:53:00 PM
Great Alliteration not so easy to write but yours is really well put together..Thanks for the visits ..Sara
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Date: 6/27/2014 4:00:00 AM
Excellent poem, JS. Many parents play the game, thinking they're keeping the children out of it, little realizing that children play their own game, too. // [been going through some of your poems....very much impressed!! a style of your own.] // paul
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Date: 6/24/2014 2:56:00 PM
A powerful poem which touches the heart of any parent ,especially if they re passing through a rough patch ,they can pull up a brave face and smile as if all is fine,or they can argue in front of their kids,Dont know which is the best or worst road.Children are indeed naive ,their life full of colours and it hurts when We act in ways that steal their rainbow ,but life is like roses,none is without thorns.Your words moved me!Great poem!
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Date: 6/22/2014 12:04:00 AM
Dear JS, Sometimes children are oblivious to the disputes of their parents. Perhaps only when the "coldness" becomes obvious, children start to notice. Yet they may still not realize that these battles are releases of their parents' frustrations. Really like the way you set up the scene of suburbia with "ticky tack homes" and pretty gardens that keep the storm clouds out of view. Excellent social commentary, my friend. Let me know when your friend posts-want to welcome her. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/21/2014 5:36:00 PM
Fantastic flow. You've painted a fine intricate picture here, and put it to the beats of life.
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