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Spring Took me By surprise Redbud blossoms Doves coo early on More species come to feed Somehow spring has subtly sprung Sunbeam shakes her yellow hair down Angled 'pon violet covered lawn Winter locked up the buds, spring held the key

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Joseph May

Date: 3/4/2024 6:49:00 PM

Wonderful write Sara, Congrats on your win

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/5/2024 3:34:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph, for dropping by with congratulations on my work. Sara K

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/4/2024 10:04:00 AM

Spring is the gatekeeper - fun image Sara. Congratulations on your win! :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/4/2024 11:34:00 AM

Why, thank you, Linda Alice. I appreciate you stopping by with congratulations. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/4/2024 7:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely Spring Etheree write/pretty picture. What a great last line/so true.... Spring will be here very soon.... Have a wonderful day/week writing away.........

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/4/2024 7:34:00 AM

We are seeing what seems like spring is here to stay. The forsythia is nearly in full bloom plus the star magnolia is in full bloom and starting to lose the first blossoms that came on it. Thanks for stopping by. Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 3/3/2024 7:27:00 PM

Beautiful Spring Etheree. "Sunbeam shakes her yellow hair down". Lovely image. Congratulations Sara on your winning placement.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/3/2024 8:11:00 PM

Thank you, Valsa, for dropping by with congratulations. Glad you liked the image.. Sara

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/3/2024 12:40:00 PM

Sara, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful poem!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/3/2024 3:49:00 PM

Thank you, Tania, for dropping by with congratulations. I am glad you like it. Sara K

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/19/2024 10:54:00 AM

This poem, dear Sara, is truly profound and thought-provoking. It evokes deep emotions, possesses a captivating charm, and is elegantly crafted. Your interpretation of the chosen form is not only subtle but also exceptional. Outstanding job!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/19/2024 12:08:00 PM

Thank you for the outstanding. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/18/2024 10:35:00 PM

This is very lovely and a charming entry for the contest

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/19/2024 6:30:00 AM

I am glad you found it lovely and charming, Andrea. I appreciate the high praise. Sara K

Howard Kerr

Date: 2/18/2024 6:19:00 AM

Evocative, charming, elegant and indeed a very subtle interpretation of the chosen form. Excellent work Howard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/18/2024 7:46:00 AM

Wow!! Excellent is such a nice word. Howard, your visit was delightful. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/17/2024 1:15:00 PM

- Yes, we have a lot of beauty waiting for us ... lovely poem, Sara :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/17/2024 2:43:00 PM

Why, thank you, Anne-Lise. It will take time then the spring greens in the forest will spring forth like a magical painting. Thanks for dropping by. Sara K

Silent One

Date: 2/17/2024 9:35:00 AM

Are you practicing or is this your contest entry? Lovely etheree.. full of nice imagery..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/17/2024 12:24:00 PM

SO, I was practicing, but I liked this so I have entered it. I might come up with one that I think is better though. Your visit is encouraging. Sara K

Gerald Dillenbeck

Date: 2/17/2024 7:00:00 AM

This is lovely. Noticing your connection of red with natural transitions like spring and fall and dawn and dusk. And I can hear those subtle doves advocating well-fed peace with more feeding species. Consciousness, here, includes perception and also deeper iconic feelings of comfort and joy, power and light, universal salvation and unitarian redemption, sacred ecology and systematic mind/body theology.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/17/2024 8:06:00 AM

Why, thank you, Gerald. I am glad you delved so deep into the meaning of my work. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Tom Woody

Date: 2/17/2024 6:03:00 AM

Gosh we're two months away but now you've got me a wishin'. Snow outside my window today

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/17/2024 8:01:00 AM

Tom, you must live up north, but this morning here in the south we have clouds that look like snow clouds, but at the present time no chance since it is 43 degrees. Spring will come at its own pace. Thanks for stopping by. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/17/2024 4:59:00 AM

absolutely a lovely poem. I especially liked 'the sun shakes her hair down.' That's an awesome image. Grateful for the signs of spring I'm seeing...I'm a bit caught of guard as well...but I'll take it. signed, "Not a winter fan." Have a great day Sara K.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/17/2024 5:10:00 AM

Nor I, Sara B, a fan of winter nor of the heat and humidity of late summer. I guess I want to live in perfect weather all the time like Peter Pan who wanted to stay a little boy forever. I appreciate your kind review of my work. Sara K