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Subtle Sounds

Listen to the subtle sounds surrounding Mother Nature. And you'll hear water chuckle as it gurgles over rocks. Hear the drone of hummingbirds or the songs of humpback whales. And the sonic squeaks and clicks exchanged by chatty dolphins. Hear a cicada compete with the chirp of a cricket. And the wailing winds whistle within the weeping willows. Hear the laughter of water careening off canyon walls. And to hear the voice of God; you merely have to listen. (Blank Verse) 4/24/2015

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Date: 3/3/2018 8:31:00 AM
Wow! You put together many of the loveliest sounds in creation. It's a FAVE for me.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/3/2018 9:02:00 AM
Thanks Line, your comments are most appreciated. Emile.
Date: 4/25/2015 7:50:00 AM
beautiful - love the last line, especially
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/25/2015 9:26:00 AM
Thanks Jack, your visits are always appreciated. Emile.
Date: 4/25/2015 6:51:00 AM
:)!!!! love the images plus the sounds I was tripped on.. :)!!! cute and adorable that il fav this too!!//olive eloisa
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/25/2015 9:25:00 AM
Thanks Olive, your visits and encouragements are always welcome. Emile.
Date: 4/24/2015 11:26:00 PM
wow, this is amazing. I have to fave this one. It's one of your best!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/25/2015 9:24:00 AM
Thanks so much Andrea, your words are very encouraging. Emile.
Date: 4/24/2015 8:29:00 PM
wonderfully descriptive and the alliteration is a real treat! i enjoyed this very much, emile...
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/25/2015 9:23:00 AM
Thanks Ilene, your visits are always welcome. Emile.
Date: 4/24/2015 12:17:00 PM
You are in a class of your own. This reads so much like Tennyson. Love the alliteration in this too. Simply beautiful. A#7
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/24/2015 3:34:00 PM
Thanks Nandita, your visits are always a treat. Emile.
Date: 4/24/2015 9:53:00 AM
Purely by your prompt I can hear all these sounds. What a pleasure. Thanks.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/24/2015 3:35:00 PM
Thanks so much Scott, your support is appreciated. Emile.
Date: 4/24/2015 8:50:00 AM
A collection of beautiful words that flow without needing to rhyme! A 7! Thank you for sharing! I am learning to appreciate poetry of all different kinds. I have always felt that it takes more intelligence to construct a poem without rhyme than with. Thanks for being an inspiration!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/24/2015 3:36:00 PM
Thanks so much Anna, your support is appreciated. Emile.

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