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Subtle Rhyme

Subtle Rhyme our lovely earth is a petty hell, ironic at some times, cos most are suffering, and do tell, depending, how much they whine, nastiness is all about, and flows like red, red, wine, wake up to dull grey roses, now paying for your crime, so subtle is the chime, a subtle hell of rhyme.... Don ah yet the times of love they linger , upon the screen of happiness, the centerpiece has the soulful singer, of love so sweet and tenderness….

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Date: 8/14/2013 12:46:00 AM
Nice piece of work. Well done. Hello from your new friend on poetry soup. Blessings to you sir from Nadia.
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Date: 8/8/2013 5:03:00 PM
Ahh!! Romantic one..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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