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The expedition of fine love Is always rewarded with wine Never to be overwhelmed Cautioned to bitter But its outcome is sweet For in a heart shelters The dew of a tear Carried for mercy Showed for comfort But in all this we miss A step and the wine is left spilled

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Date: 10/3/2018 1:13:00 PM
A cool turning of the phrase at the end of this beautifully written and thoughtful poem, Michelle. Marvelous debut poem. Love and more love always.
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Michelle James
Date: 10/3/2018 6:50:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 2/1/2016 5:53:00 PM
Michelle, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Michelle James
Date: 2/6/2016 9:27:00 AM
Thank you, I'm so happy.

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