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Substance

:A woman that wants substance and trust, not interested in giving into meaningless lust. A refreshing twist of fate. I'm truly interested in getting things straight. Not wanting a meaningless lay. Our options and choices we must to chose to weigh. I say I want substance from the man that I'm dating. So paying attention to the substance I'm offering and the words that I am saying. Allowing myself to be vulnerable and let you see my true identity. That my spirit is filled with a love that surpasses most entities. I'm absolutely positive that you will see, My value, my worth, and my endless possibilities. There is so much more to me than passion and sexuality. Creating love that I want is my choice for my personal reality. Sharing what has made us into the people we are today. Will only ensure to bring us closer in the deepest possible way. I look forward to allowing you into my heart. I know this is just the beginning and a beautiful start.:

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Date: 4/6/2012 4:19:00 PM
Dawn ive read all of your poems you have here,i hope to read more they all are great,your poems have alot of emotion tied up in them,alot of anger,sadness,hope, alot of hurt to but best of all knowlege,like all of your experiences and what you have gone through will help other,the people who read them will get inspired,your a very strong woman..keep it up dawn,keep it up
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Date: 4/6/2012 1:11:00 PM
welcome to the soup Dawn, i totally get your message and i think you expressed it beautifully. looking forward to see more of your work and hope that you will like mine. perhaps you'll see that with you i agree.
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Dawn Pulido
Date: 4/6/2012 1:31:00 PM
lol I see that thanks for the connection :)
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John Loving Iii
Date: 4/6/2012 1:13:00 PM
p.s. dont let the first poem of mine fool you. i'm spread out on a lot of things and won't bore you.

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