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Pride never kept me off my knees It was mostly about the injustice of unrequited love We are the smoke of unheard prayers Children sending telegrams over the black oceans of death Children running to the post office to ask for miracles... Pride never kept me off my knees My existence is highly improbable I am waiting with sweaty palms for the ink that will set me free

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/26/2014 4:36:00 AM
Wow!!! What an entry to the soup! Love 'the smoke of unheard prayers' and the last line. I have always thought writing was the best therapy.
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Martin Lochner
Date: 11/26/2014 4:41:00 AM
thank you for your comment Monterey :)
Date: 11/26/2014 1:03:00 AM
Thank you for featuring this poem :)
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Date: 11/21/2014 9:13:00 AM
It will come, Martin, it will come. Writing is the catharsis for healing and rediscovery of self. Write on!
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Martin Lochner
Date: 11/26/2014 12:58:00 AM
Thank you Cona!
Date: 11/19/2014 8:45:00 AM
love the increasing intensity of each line the ladt line us a wow.. love the phrase smoke of unheard prayers.. :) indeed writing is both healthy to the heart Nd mind.. :) i can see that this the very first poem you sybmitted here very appropriate.. wrting somehow liberates us in so many ways... welcome here.. :) been atound here more than two years now . i leatnrd a lot bout poetry here and gain some good friends here.. :) welcome! keep writing!! hope you can check my CHARM OF POETRY! :)
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Martin Lochner
Date: 11/19/2014 9:02:00 AM
Thank you for your comment and I will be visiting you soon
Date: 11/17/2014 2:19:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Martin - I choose your first deep and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Martin Lochner
Date: 11/19/2014 6:10:00 AM
Appeciated and enjoying the poetry.
Date: 11/17/2014 12:20:00 AM
Lyric Man and Darlene I want to thank you for your comments. Cannot wait to read your work. Martin
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Date: 11/14/2014 8:06:00 AM
Martin, I enjoyed reading your poem, and let nothing keep you off your knees. A 7 from me. God is Good, Darlene
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Martin Lochner
Date: 11/17/2014 12:22:00 AM
God is good. Thank you. Cannot wait to read your work!

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