Submissively

Set thee apart, as you yield- and lean upon me

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Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 1/8/2010 10:14:00 AM

Interesting use of word in this Fibonacci. Enjoyed the imagery presented too. Thanks for sharing another gem of a poetry form. Best wishes, Caroline.

Sena Slaughter

Date: 1/8/2010 9:40:00 AM

Beautiful words of truth and inspiration!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2010 8:51:00 AM

Thanks for another of your wise and spiritual reminders, Brian. I have a question for you in soupmail. andrea (and thanks for cmmenting on my children of the year)

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/8/2010 8:43:00 AM

Actually, it is very comforting to know someone could be there to lean on.....or to know that they could also lean on me....either way....I love this thought. ~ Nicely done. Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/8/2010 6:14:00 AM

Great words Brian.. nice to depend on someone if that someone wants u to... great title ...not for the faint of heart... blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/8/2010 5:11:00 AM

Some of us have a lot of I did it my way in us don't we. I guess the "Bible" calls that rebellion which is a sin. Keep the creative and educational pen flowing. Sara...I posted some this morning that my grandson wrote ...He is the one with Huntington's Disease...He is in and out of depression...Emotions going back and forth. The man that wrote and sung the song "This Land Is Your Land This Land Is My Land" also had HD. Sara

Elaine George

Date: 1/8/2010 3:12:00 AM

Hi Brian, Another view! My observations on this matter over the 63 years I have lived, leave me with many, I could write a book . It is a grey area for me. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poetry. Elaine

Anthony Nutter

Date: 1/8/2010 3:10:00 AM

Simple, short, and full of meaning. Excellent write.

Helen J Radford

Date: 1/8/2010 12:33:00 AM

Simple and profound. Bravo Brian