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take me to the edge of pain that drowns the crowding thoughts and builds my nerves on edge to break in a cascading rush draw out the gasps and shudders turn the wrenching sobs around in tandem to the breaths I breath make this pleasure drag unbound Melt my mind into your body pour your music in my ears and drip your scalding magic on skin that tears so clear bind these limbs that fought my fears these wrist scarred with secrets sought take my omissions into your heart my body broken for your protection tie up the world that spins around all the daily in-consequences so that once my heart is vulnerable the walls we built are truly broken melt this pleasure-pain submissive into a safe word that shows your care blend my psyche with forceful dare but let my soul know your true intentions

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/16/2013 5:04:00 PM
This is a thriller read.....
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Tara Jennings
Date: 7/18/2013 4:29:00 PM
thank you, I though I dropped the rhythm and rhyming but I couldn't find anything that flowed better that fit how I felt
Date: 7/16/2013 2:27:00 PM
I really love the beauty of this piece. You write much like I do. Love, JM
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Date: 7/16/2013 12:22:00 PM
Powerful and insightful poem into your very sensitive yet expressive character. Great write
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Tara Jennings
Date: 7/16/2013 2:04:00 PM
thanx for reading it:)
Date: 7/16/2013 12:16:00 PM
If you're going to put my heart on this roller coaster, hold my hands throughout the ride. I completely dig this! Excellent message here!
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Poet Tacito
Date: 7/16/2013 2:52:00 PM
LOL I didn't mean to, I swear! Your poem triggered it. ;)
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Tara Jennings
Date: 7/16/2013 2:03:00 PM
lol I think I like your phrase better than my poem, to cute ;)
Date: 7/16/2013 11:25:00 AM
- A very well written poem you share with us today Tara - I like it, you're talented!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Tara Jennings
Date: 7/16/2013 2:04:00 PM
thank you very much, much appreciated

Book: Shattered Sighs