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Submerged In Sadness

I was always disrespected,
 Treated as optional person.
 I was ignored many a times,
 Betrayed a lot as if I was enemy.
 No one feeled my absence, rather they celebrated.
 If I go, no one called me back.
 No one asked me for a gift.
 I was like a piece of cloth,
 wen I was new, I was loved.
 But when I got ruined,
 I was thrown out with no care.

 Do you know the reason why all these frolic things happened with me?
 I lived with vivacity,
 I respected others more than myself.
 I lived for those who needed me.

 Now, I am helpless, 
 Torn like an old diary, with missing pages of attitude, esteem, pride.
 O! Universe, Help me to re-built.
 intoxicated with agony and pain,
 Give me support to walk with vitality.

 I wants to smile like all do.....
 Want to be loved by someone truly.
 I wants to be king, of sumone's heart, Not of the entire world.
 Need a meaning to my life.
 Separate me from this meaningless life, please.

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  1. Date: 7/14/2013 6:37:00 PM
    Wow!!!!! I love this poem poet, I know I shouldn't love this poem that much, because it shows alot pain, thats way I love it so much. Excellent poem poet