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i look in the mirror and the mirror shatters bit and peices say what you say matters look at your family and friends they think this is where your life ends the are worried why can you see that all your negativity is hurting everyone so let it be you say your a hero but you cant even save your own life someone might as well come and stab you with a knife you hear that they are calling for you syaoran they want to help you dont leave yet im not done im telling you what needs to be so dont run I slowly respond im not a fighter im a writer but you use that writing for the worst choice dont write use your voice i punch they shards of glass i hear one last stupid phrase save yourself dont be an ass These voices wont go away Why wont they leeave today

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/14/2011 2:54:00 PM
lol yes i know i spelt a few things wrong the computer wasnt working right and i was in a rush to get this up
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Date: 7/14/2011 7:12:00 AM
A very interesting and enjoyable read Dennis. Hope you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2011 8:33:00 PM
the voices spelled it wrong...hehe.....enjoyed reading your poem.
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Date: 7/13/2011 2:29:00 PM
Nice introspection, but you might want to use spell check. Just a thought.
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