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Stupid Love

i cannot believe how stupid i can surely be. loveing you with my heart while you crawl around like a mole snooping,spying, searching, finding why do i suddenly feel i am dying. loving you with my heart whole so you broke it like a bowl i know im young its just begun but why is my song already sung? you can tell it as a lie. even make it a lullaby make it have a happy ending but your story might be pending lord knows you dont even know what my heart can truely show

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/6/2012 12:34:00 PM
Nice write Candy! Your title sums it up well in the case of betrayal - love is only lovely when things flow smoothly.
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Date: 9/30/2012 9:25:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Candy. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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