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Bright butterflies love warm weather They sometimes settle on beautiful blooms Tall tulips, pretty pansies, Lush lilacs, see vibrant visitors. Little lambs drink mum’s milk Then gambol gaily on green grass Flora, fauna of scenic spring Alliterisen Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May 05/14/23

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 6/19/2023 7:17:00 AM

Terrific alliteration Jan, and a very imagery-filled write. :)

David Fisher

Date: 5/30/2023 5:05:00 PM

Ahh, this makes you feel immersed in the story.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/30/2023 12:54:00 PM

I remember thinking how cute this was. Congrats, dear friend.

Joseph May

Date: 5/29/2023 8:55:00 AM

Lovely write Jan, Congrats on your win

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/29/2023 6:00:00 AM

Jan, CONGRATS on your well-deserved win~~lovely poem. Janice

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/19/2023 9:35:00 AM

So lovely having you back and reading your poetry Jan, this one is such a pick me up after Winter poem and, so cute, warm and cheery. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. - GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2023 1:54:00 PM

Thanks so much Jennifer:-) hugs jan xx

Anisha Dutta

Date: 5/17/2023 11:36:00 PM

Enjoyed . Delighted. All the best for contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/17/2023 11:56:00 PM

Thanks Anisha:-) hugs jan xx

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 5/15/2023 3:06:00 PM

Very joyful Jan, I love the sweet imagery!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/17/2023 11:56:00 PM

thanks BJ:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/14/2023 11:07:00 PM

Delightfully composed, Jan. Hugs.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/15/2023 1:18:00 PM

thanks Victor:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/14/2023 3:25:00 PM

this is delightful and charming, jan! your alliteration feels so natural and i love all of your examples. i'm still getting used to seeing your name on the list of new poems and it's a sight for sore eyes!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/15/2023 1:17:00 PM

aww Ilene the end of your comment brought a lump to my throat, thanks so much for your continual support:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/14/2023 12:28:00 PM

Hi Jan, You chose a nice picture to accompany your well-written verse. Best wishes in the contest—Happy Belated Mother's Day. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 5/15/2023 1:17:00 PM

Thanks so much Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 5/14/2023 12:08:00 PM

Jan Allison gamboling in the soup kitchen is something Ive wanted to see for many months.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/14/2023 12:23:00 PM

Aww Lin, the time was right in my life to return and I think I am here to stay now:-) hugs jan xx

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/14/2023 12:03:00 PM

Nicely penned poem with great thoughts and wonderful imagery. Happy Mother's Day dear friend.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/14/2023 12:22:00 PM

Thanks Sotto we celebrate Mother's day in March, it was so so hard being my first one without my amazing mum. hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/14/2023 11:24:00 AM

Lovely, lighthearted…I want to gambol ;) Happy Sunday!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/14/2023 11:36:00 AM

lol Kim I absolutely adore seeing the newborn lambs in the fields:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2023 11:13:00 AM

Wonderful, my friend. Love seeing you here

Jan Allison
Date: 5/14/2023 11:17:00 AM

aww thanks Andrea its so good to be back and to have inspiration for contests:-) hugs Jan xx